Once we edited our first draft of the thriller, we went back and watched it repeatedly in order to gain an idea of what we wanted to change and what we wanted to keep the same.
Feedback
We got feedback from a media teacher, who had experience on working on films, and he gave his views as to what parts may need to be changed and or expanded on. One of his ideas was when the camera zoomed out and revealed the whole wall, but he felt this gave too much of the story away in one go so therefore we changed it so it only revealed the newspaper cut out which we felt worked alot better. Also he said that we needed more images of the stalker, but we felt that we didnt want to ruin the indentity or give too much away and so therefore we did not add any extra shots in.
Our own ideas
So once we did this, our first aim was to change the way in which the film unfolded because we felt it didnt really lead up to anything but instead it was slow and tension was not built up. In order to change this, we decided on having the speed of which it was played, sped up when it was on the reverse and also added more shots in to heighten the anticipation that the audience was feeling.
Aswell at we needed to add our soundtrack to the clip, which wasn't finished when making our draft. We made the track to emulate what was going on in the piece and therefore more layers were added as it went on although near the end we felt that the heartbeat on its own created an eery feel and therefore played on the emotions once again.